I totally agree with Aerin. Personally, I feel that a story with bad grammar is pretty much comparable to a "relaxing" vocal concert generously sprinkled with screechy high notes. Put some work into writing, for heavens's sake. I know it's online, but that's all the more reason for you to put in effort because everyone will be reading it, not just your friends. About good literature: well, look at some of the published writers out there? Can you write like that? Will you ever be able to write like that? Do you want to be able to write like that? If you're not good enough, polish up. Life is one step after another. So's writing. There's no shortcut and no result without effort.